Dílo #6482
Autor:Diotima
Druh:<žádný>
Kategorie:Poezie/Volné verše
Zóna:Jasoň
Datum publikace:25.05.2004 11:34
Počet návštěv:2674
Počet názorů:25
Hodnocení:9
Patří do sbírky:Žena uprostřed života

Prolog
Litochoro 8/2001
vzpomínka
Woman´s Love


she loved a lot of men - somehow
her first love - at four
she loved him so much
she would give all her toys to him
she was crazy and her heart beat fast
as she saw this blond beauty Joe
with light blue eyes
the second love - an old man
ten years old at five
she couldn´t look into his eyes
she would go mad
next loves were for a couple of years
dancing on ice and playing own songs on a piano
crying of something like sadness
many lovers came then
from loves like fresh water and fun
to passion sex
better or worse or none
but better and better
and deeper and deeper feelings
the last one with a lot of understanding
tenderness and pain
the last one - the deepest
wishing to make love and die together
and on her life journey
she broke a lot of hearts
but did not understand
passion of these boys and men to her
was hunted
felt innocent but
made so many of them unhappy
but this comes back to her now
not too much left of her beauty
which was pure magic
but with mind
of a sleeping virgin
now - wild at heart
full of passion
searching man´s skin
she loves so much
but no hunters are here
she is a hunter
she would like to give so much
of her love
of her passion
body and life
but no one is here for her
with whom she could drink
each other´s body
mind
and soul
and passion
No one.
and she can give so much
as never before
but no one is here for her
only phantasy and dreams
stayed
and loneliness
and an atrophic heart

(but maybe she was a sleeping virgin
all of her life)



Epilog
některé věci člověk nemá odvahu říct v mateřštině

Počet úprav: 5, naposledy upravil(a) 'Diotima', 25.05.2004 12:01.

Názory čtenářů
26.05.2004 17:30
Diotima
Igorku, mohl bys mi raději říct - píše se vomited nebo vomitted? přízvuk je na začátku, tak by to mělo být jen vomited, n´est pas?
26.05.2004 17:52
Igor_Indruch
můj spell check říká "vomited" :o))
26.05.2004 17:57
Diotima
Thank you velmi much, kšáááá! :-)))
31.05.2004 11:05
Diotima
Vše v dobrém, milý pane :-)
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