Dílo #39766
Autor:toomey
Druh: Tvorba
Kategorie:Poezie/Volné verše
Zóna:Jasoň
Datum publikace:28.05.2007 22:54
Počet návštěv:1023
Počet názorů:11
Hodnocení:5 1
Patří do archívu:<Soukromý> vittorijo: zimomrjavky

A poem on my own birthday
How come
that being at my prime
feels like I am just a bud
and no matter
how long I cry
or how many smiley days
in a row there are
I remain
enclosed, protected.

Who knows
whose rains
will break open, if.
Rooting on the reef - my life
I might succumb airstreams
from the north of solitude,
or flirtwinds.
I might as well just dry out.

Názory čtenářů
29.05.2007 09:17
Shari
no drying out these days...
29.05.2007 14:53
vittorijo
delicious

but pity that not many guys here would bother to read it..
29.05.2007 14:59
Bix
Skvelá. Ženská, premieňajúca.
29.05.2007 19:04
Mori
29.05.2007 20:34
toomey
Shari: no breezes either...

vittorijo: its OK with me, as long as the few can appreciate :)

Bix: Ď.!
30.05.2007 10:37
Shari
so, let´s call us "the Few" :-)

breezes, breezes,... remind me of sad memories
30.05.2007 14:04
toomey
Shari: thats exactly what i meant by the few

30.05.2007 14:10
Shari
arent you a smart girl? ;-)))
30.05.2007 14:30
toomey
its not every day that the world arranges itself into walking smartness, me :)
30.05.2007 16:01
random_night
yeah, well... nothing to say really...
30.05.2007 16:02
random_night
vittorijo napsal(a):
delicious

but pity that not many guys here would bother to read it..
as a matter of fact not many would understand so why should they read it

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