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Dílo #39825
Autor:	vittorijo
Druh:	Tvorba
Kategorie:	Poezie/Vyznání
Zóna:	Jasoň
Datum publikace:	29.05.2007 21:31
Počet návštěv:	2830
Počet názorů:	31
Hodnocení:	8 1
Patří do sbírky:	let my music heal you..
Patří do archívu:	<Soukromý> Shari: pomojemu

Prolog

s vedomím, že si to asi veľa ľudí neprečíta..

come back home

whenever you’re bored to walk

alone

just come back home

whenever you need to talk

just come

just come back home

the memories so fast already at my back

the harming hand of past colors my face again

the unforgiven fingers snaking ‘round my neck

all the symptoms of my inner pain

are here

this time i need you
(on the times like this)
just this time i need you the most
(need you the most)

when the fist of past educates my face again
when the will to live is smaller than to die
on the times like this i need a pair of hands
those your small hands to hide my crying eyes
i need so much

right this time i need you
(on the times like this)
this time i need you the most
(need you the most)

tender fingers travel down my body scarred
as your eyes down my yet unhealed soul
never told me who you are
but you saw it somehow, somehow you knew it all..

right this time i need you
(almost everyday)
this time i need you the most

but maybe this time you need me
(maybe you do)
maybe this time you would come back home
(come back home)

Epilog

music: juro & noRedemption
lyrics: viktor

(ps.na pozjadanje zmenim kategoriju..)

Počet úprav: 7, naposledy upravil(a) 'vittorijo', 30.05.2007 02:00.

Názory čtenářů

30.05.2007 14:24

toomey

dik za avi :)
suhlasim s random_night "those your small hands..." nesikovne ale chapem ze potrebujes to matchnut s melodiou vokalom atd...
ja osobne si nemyslim ze si poloboh ale viem ze si s tym v poho :) song je cool inak, really, ja sa ale obmedzujem na take dramatickejsie veci ako napr. :

Cheers darlin'
Here's to you and your lover boy
Cheers darlin'
I got years to wait around for you
Cheers darlin'
I've got your wedding bells in my ear
Cheers darlin'
You give me three cigarettes to smoke my tears away

And I die when you mention his name
And I lied, I should have kissed you
When we were running the reins

What am I darlin'?
A whisper in your ear?
A piece of your cake?
What am I, darlin?
The boy you can fear?
Or your biggest mistake?

Cheers darlin'
Here's to you and your lover man
Cheers darlin'
I just hang around and eat from a can
Cheers darlin'
I got a ribbon of green on my guitar
Cheers darlin'
I got a beauty queen
To sit not very far from here

I die when he comes around
To take you home
I'm too shy
I should have kissed you when we were alone

What am I darlin'?
A whisper in your ear?
A piece of your cake?
What am I, darlin?
The boy you can fear?
Or your biggest mistake?

Oh what am I? What am I darlin'?
I got years to wait...

Ale live koncert vas by mohol byt celkom nieco speci takze davaj mi avi aj na koncert{y} pls ok? cheers!

30.05.2007 14:58

vittorijo

ad toomey:

(o: ja osobne dufam ze njesom poloboh (o% ale ta materska laska..

mas to tu aj ako djelo? dal by som si to do archivu ak hej, vyvolava to dobre atmosferu.. uplne si to vjem predstavit so zenskym hlasom amolovimi gitarami atd.. (len moja predstava a deformacija (o: )

30.05.2007 14:58

vittorijo

30.05.2007 15:03

toomey

aha takze materska :)

to ale nie je moje dielo, je to damien rice, on to aj spieva kua a ako spieva
ukazem ti moje akoze lyrics dielo, sleduj {tak o tri minutky}

31.05.2007 12:01

Shari

jasne ze materska, sak s nim sa neda zit :))

31.05.2007 12:05

vittorijo

Shari napsal(a):

jasne ze materska, sak s nim sa neda zit :))

este pred chvilou si spala v mojej posteli a bola ti dobra (o:

31.05.2007 12:08

Shari

psssst ;o) , lebo nas zavru

31.05.2007 13:44