Dílo #23221
Autor:kuřecí hovínko
Druh:<žádný>
Kategorie:Poezie/Ostatní
Zóna:Jasoň
Datum publikace:01.02.2006 13:26
Počet návštěv:4873
Počet názorů:32
Hodnocení:23 1
Patří do archívu:<Soukromý> Zrzavý_kotě: potěcha pro kotě - písmenka

frrrrr...

lásko...no tak se rozejdem
každý svou cestou …jako kdysi
dnes ještě můj…  
zítra čí jsi?
jiné
zahnízdíš v srdci okoralém

no tak se rozejdem...dle tradic citů
mi kdysi darovals veselý smích
dřív ze mě zněl...ztich
je všechno pryč
jen...

to konec je tu

no tak se rozejdem... zaklapnem knihu

s příběhem...

co nám život psal

všechno sis vzal zase zpátky...

snad bylo to krátký...
však necháš rýhu
v srdci mém... i v mojí duši

zbylo pár fotek...

vůně zakouslá do polštáře
v omšelém adresáři tvé jméno
výsměšně ční...

 ...však jsi to tušil!

že jednou se miláčku rozejdem
a další tvoje
mám tě rád!....do oušek
však jiné ženě
vím...nebudeš lhát
v příběhu dalším
veselém

 

Epilog

přeju ti štěstí...

to se tak přeje

tvůj hlas je ve mně...
však po tobě zem slehla se

no tak se lásko rozejdem...
co mělo být...
co z toho je?

 jen šmouhy na duze...

Názory čtenářů
01.02.2006 15:39
Burlev
trochu dTto bříza
a ostatní si nechám pro sebe...
01.02.2006 15:45
Janina Magali
Tahle mě dostala*1176*
01.02.2006 16:36
Nechci
trochu doják
01.02.2006 17:06
Stevenson
DD .-)T
01.02.2006 17:41
Natasha
Hodně doják, ale ne tak banální, jako bývají -
Přesto bych tipovala víc ze sympatie než z obdivu k textu.
01.02.2006 17:41
Albireo
Smutné, ale nádherné. A ty šmouhy na duze!!!
01.02.2006 17:58
Zuzulinka
někdy je nutné se nejdříve rozejít, abychom se skutečně sešli*
01.02.2006 18:10
engelmar
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01.02.2006 18:25
kuřecí hovínko
děkuju za pozastavení a ohlasy...:-)

...a engelmarovi za obzvláště vkusnou tapetku...
01.02.2006 18:28
kuřecí hovínko
Konvalina napsal(a):
kuřecí hovínko napsal(a):
děkuju za pozastavení a ohlasy...:-) ...a engelmarovi za obzvláště vkusnou tapetku...
Vždyť to odflinknut, nemá to zarovnaný! ;-)))
asi mu došel dech;-) zkus to sfouknout na jeden výdech:-))
01.02.2006 18:56
Nick
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01.02.2006 19:50
Mario Czerney

vy dva mě pěkně serete

01.02.2006 21:09
Delphy
mám pocit že za poslední měsíc se všichni rozcházejí nebo se jim přinejmenším hroutí vztahy.. :()

rozumím

*a tip za krásnou báseň*
01.02.2006 21:36
eliah bruno
no jooooo...když já frrrr tak ty frrrr a frrrr a ještě jednou frrrr...:-)))

ta holka blbne výtečně
i v citech - a taky jinak
na vrchol cesta přímá...
sa drápu - vedu si statečně

sám pro sebe sem soudcem
a tipuju svý kroky
na vršku zařvu --Pojď sem!
čekám tak dlouho....

a roky -
ty plynou sakra!
:-))
*
03.02.2006 23:22
Lu_Po
zlip
05.02.2006 16:42
henadi
*asi nemám slov...
14.02.2006 16:53
silent
inu tak...
01.03.2006 00:04
Zrzavý_kotě
frrrtip *
20.05.2006 07:22
guy
po dočtení jsem se vrátil na začátek - a to první slovo mi nacvaklo Kryla - a při novým čtení mi to ta vlezlá melodie podbarvovala a byla z toho zase trochu jiná kvalita ... to se mi občas stává a považuju takový souznění za vyjádření kvality .. *
22.11.2006 18:14
sokrates
líbí moc a dokonce to chápu(zřídkavá to věc), nebo aspoň myslím...
a není to podkuřování :-)))
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