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Dílo #45384
Autor:vittorijo
Druh: Tvorba
Kategorie:Poezie/Vyznání
Zóna:Jasoň
Datum publikace:05.12.2007 12:36
Počet návštěv:653
Počet názorů:8
Hodnocení:1
Patří do sbírky:let my music heal you..

13th floor
"13th floor"

the autumn rain is falling
down on a whithered lip
in fact, the whole world is to fall along

beneath the skin there slowly crawling
yet too unknown to be ripped
the venom much too strong

though trying to spit it off with the millionth cigarette
spit it down on you
smiling somewhere polishing your friday's finger-tips
it does not seem to ever hit your head
nor to fight its way down through
all the water knocking on your window drip

just like a window pane
tempting me to break it with a bare-skinned hand
like touching the pistol of a smiling policeman
only to see what then comes
is letting you rule my mind again

the same old autumn calling
too permanent and deadly just to understand
“nothing lasts forever, even cold november rain”

yet the burning rain keeps falling
with that senseless chant
in fact, the whole world is to fall again

still trying to spit it off though it never falls on you I know
for the winter's come
and before I could water those blue eyes
it simply turns to snow
(and covers everything..)

just like a window pane
tempting to be broken with a bare-skinned hand
like touching the pistol of a smiling policeman
only to see what is then to come
perhaps this will hurt..

when feeling flame maybe I now finally understand
touching it means being burnt..

yes, it's raining, my dear.. I can see..
and you just smile and point
“why does it always rain on me?”


Názory čtenářů
05.12.2007 13:09
Shari
theres no reason
to shield from rain
06.12.2007 08:44
Dominika
kdepak je link na mjúzik ?
:)
06.12.2007 16:02
vittorijo
Shari napsal(a):
theres no reason
to shield from rain
there is, if one's drowning (o;

Dominika napsal(a):
kdepak je link na mjúzik ?
:)
mjuzik este nje je, a ked bude tak to nebude este nahraté (((o= takze este dost dlho asi iba lajf verzija
06.12.2007 16:31
Shari

why not to die in water?
cant see the reason, son :)
look at it logically - the more it is raining, the higher is the water level
- in fact, raining takes you higher ;))
07.12.2007 14:53
vittorijo
Shari napsal(a):

why not to die in water?
cant see the reason, son :)
look at it logically - the more it is raining, the higher is the water level
- in fact, raining takes you higher ;))

ha, all the troubles started because i got high

(as afroman used to sing (o; )
07.12.2007 15:36
Shari
coz i got  high,.. yeah :o)

all the troubles started, because you cant concentrate ;)
07.12.2007 16:21
vittorijo
or cause i concentrate too much
07.12.2007 16:31
Shari
on things that dont need attention..

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