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Dílo #34895
Autor:	Prototyp
Druh:	Tvorba
Kategorie:	Próza/Úlet
Zóna:	Jasoň
Datum publikace:	03.01.2007 13:41
Počet návštěv:	1242
Počet názorů:	8
Hodnocení:	2 1

Prolog

There is no end.

On the wire

The phone has gone silent. There was only cracking on the line. When suddenly...a distant mumbling broke the disturbing silence and started to grow louder. The operator shuddered. For a while he thought that he was just making things up, but when he finally grew aware of the presence, he was already unable to move the speaker away from his ear.

The mumbling echoed in his head for a while and lingered. Bouncing off of every cell in his brain. Overwhelming all his senses, it now became a clear speech. Melody and harmony dripping from every single word. And as the pitch increased, the sensation of this distant voice begun to bend his very existence.

They found him on the ground.

Crooked and bent and lifeless.

His body was given a proper burial

...while his mind was enjoying the pleasures of planar travel for the first time.

Epilog

And no beginning either.

Počet úprav: 1, naposledy upravil(a) 'Prototyp', 03.01.2007 15:46.

Názory čtenářů

03.01.2007 13:46

Danny

"úlet" v pravém slova smyslu... uletěl jim všem... asi do svobody...

03.01.2007 15:55

Natasha

Angličtina je to jediné, co mě na tom zaujalo, v překladu bych to asi ani nedočetla. Text je disproporční i v té své krátkosti - odnikud nikam, jak trefně píše sám autor.

03.01.2007 15:59